Stuff My Sisters Will Like

To Jenny, Katie and Laura, From Their Brother, Victor

A Writing Style Critique of “Twilight” September 4, 2015

Filed under: Funny,Politics,Stuff — Fr. Victor Feltes @ 8:00 am

An amusing article from our country’s wirelessstate run media organization.

In Short:
They don’t think it is well written.

Money Quote:
From page 190: “I quickly rubbed my hand across my cheek, and sure enough, traitor tears were there, betraying me.” That’s like saying, “I took a bite, taking some of the food in my mouth.”

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